gypsy blues

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by gizmobear (move over school!) on Sunday, 22-Jul-2007 1:02:44

Gypsy early morning blues.
Spells binding hands and toes
Wicked tongues twisted thrice

To endure these early morning gypsy blues
Natures breath, hear my pleas
Earths embrace take me deep
Cast a spell
Cast a spell
Words you speak to my lovers dreams

May he hear in his gypsy dream
Make him mine make him whole make him startle make him bold.

Hold his heart in just this place
Hold his soul in your embrace
Make him whole make him weep
Natures breath, whisper might in his ear
Ancient earth void his curse
Void his curse
Make him whole.
Make him weep.
Make him whole.
Make him weep.
Let his tears overflow cleanse him in your morning dew.
Cleanse his restless soul.
Let him go
Let him go
Like morning dew, let him go, let him go
Release him from this gypsy morning blues

Post 2 by speedie (move over school!) on Sunday, 22-Jul-2007 9:26:23

That's fierce gorgeous

Stevie.

Post 3 by gizmobear (move over school!) on Friday, 27-Jul-2007 12:29:29

Thank you for stopping by and reading my work. I encourage you to leave some feed back. Peace. Gizzzzzy.

Post 4 by skpoet711 (Zone BBS is my Life) on Saturday, 28-Jul-2007 21:19:29

Hey there,
sounds great.
My suggestion is to place "make him bold" on another line.
Keep it up